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I'm interested in starting Rp on this server so I wrote a short story to the toon im making. plz tell me if im screwing up the lore or doing anything ab-normal, I wrote this all while very tired and hope you join into this story anyway you want or just enjoy it. It takes place In Gilneas City.

The Worgen Named Rimah

Born 2 years after the 2nd war Rimah was raise in a home of unfavorable traits. Her father a grand mage in the 2nd war lost one of his hands due to his blind hatred to the horde. Her mother an artisan in first aid who only was kind to those mortally wounded. Rimah lived her life aiding her father on his experiments and running erands when she had time to breath. She lacked a proper education but her father taught her 3 intellectual know hows, how to speak ( at unedgucated noble level ), how to protect herself ( so she may never burden her family with disability ), and how to laugh ( in her life she only knew work and studies, only her fathers humor held light in her world.)

Upon the coming of age (14) in her famileys heritege she was considered
an adult once she had met a love. 2 years had passed and she had no hopes of finding a lover till her weekly trip to the market for bread. As she pondered the loafs for the least moaldy peice she had seen that a fresh baked loaf had found its way into the old pile. Paying the bazarist money for cheap bread and then reaching for the new loaf while he was putting the copper away a guard yelled "HALT!!" "THEIF". Rimah freaked, they had quickly caught onto what she planned, she dug her foot into the ground as she started a full sprint to immideatly run into a man fully cloaked. They fell to the ground as the gaurds closed, the man pulled out a knife and held it to Rimas throat and told her to stand. The guards nerves as what he may do lowered their weapons. "If u harm that yound maiden we will have an execution like which youve never seen before mongrel." said the guard. "Is that so?, all you have to do is pretend you never saw anything" he said with a smirk and started to back away. The cloaked man then picked Rimah up and ran at full sprint down the market way, guards rampaging after. They manage to get away by hiding under some drift wood floating down a canal.

The man then released Rimah and begged for her apolige for this was not what he wanted. "What do you mean this isn't what you wanted you and ran from the guards!" rimah screamed in irate at the man. "please mylady let me explain starting with my name, I am Caflin Gefase the 29th of a family serving spys for the High lord himself. The reason I've taken the... this "rare" item was it to be returned before a man known as Arugal was to return to his keep." Caflin tried to convince Rima. But Rima rebutled "If you work for the king himself why were you running?". If the king found out about this item we would have a small war on Araguls manor and town. A force againts such a small village would start political catastrophies. If Arugal finds that this item is missing he would certainly release his experiments upon our kingdom. And no army could stop these "beings"".After a romantic night at the local inn she fell in love with the mysterious Caflin.

The next morning she had awoke to find 30g and a note-

"Morning my love,

I have left to return the "item" to its last known location. I
will return before the end of the day. Use the money to help your family and buy
yourself somthing nice. I would love to have supper so please meet with me at the
Hill Giant Cafe, If you do not appear I will understand.Till then

Love,
Caflin."

This was teh first time in Rimas life where she felt meaning to someone
and a tear ran down her face, not of sadness or pain but of shear joy. She ran home to support her familey and tell them of the good news. Her father was able to rise out of his chair for the first time in many years to cheer over the word. Her mother walked over and gave her a hug, kissed her on the forehead, and whispered " I knew you would become social unlike your father". Rima left her home and went to a fine dress shop, scared to touch anything for fear of ruining anything she may not be able to afford. Reading a lable of 40 silver she began to be come distressed that she may not find somthing she could buy. " excuse ma'am is there somthing i may help you with" a clerk with rosy cheeks called to Rima. " uuuhhh... I... can you help me find a dress to buy withen my budget?" Rima barely managed to force out. "why yes of coarse how much are you planning to spend?" " this much" RIma pulled out 27 gold. *the clerk almost fainted at the ammount she was carrying* " Ma'am with that much money you could buy everything withen the blocks marketing concerns." With that the two picked out a slender brown dress for her date.

Rima arrived to the cafe to be escorted to a privite booth to wait for Caflin. Hour after hour she waited, yet he never showed. " wher-" she began and was interrupted by the ringing of bells and the sound of war horns." what in the high lords name!?" she ran out of the cafe and saw guards rushing to the the Greymain gate. "THEY ARNT HUMEN, THEY ARNT HUMEN!!" a terrified man farmer ran to the center of town. Not worried over what dangers may befall her she only thought "...Caflin...". She ran to the gate as fast as she could, when she reached it she was exashted but had to find him. " Gaurd! Guard! have you seena spy by the name of Caflin." "No mylady the only people to come through the gate are farmers and their families along with the soildier escorting them, we are beginning to shut the gates, if hes still out there hes a dead man." "...no... it cant be" she fell to the ground, NOT YOU NOT KNOW, WHY, WHY, WHY!?" "Ma'am!, look is that your man the one running there."

Rimah took in a long gasp "Caflin..." Caflin was running at a speed she had not seen even a horse run. Less then 60 yards from the gate somthing flew from a trees knocking him out of vision. "CAFLIN!!!" she screamed in horror. "Its too late for him we need to close the gates now their too close!" a captain barked. " NO you cant hes still out there, HES STILL ALIVE!" Rimah cried out. Then between the cracks of the closing gate it was Caflin barely standing "RIMAH... ILL BE BACK WAIT FOR ME AND I WILL RETURN TO YOU." he screamed in pain as the gates shut. "NO, NO,no..." she looked down on her knees punching the ground crying. "... Ill wait for you."

Over the next week ceremonys were held for those killed or missing, Rimah stayed at the plaque honoring the enlisted M.I.A., she sat there for hours even in the rain. "Ma'am are you lost?" a man in a black cloak asked her. "No I know where my home is." Rimah replied. The man smiled "but where will your home be after you die or if your house burns down, if you follow me I can give you a familey and love that wont ever go away." Rimah was shocked at the mans words could he be speaking the truth, she dident care she wanted to be anywhere but here.